Marzia

Ville (Pays): Pn (Italia)

17-12-2005

Review: hai invertito i ruoli!!!mantre in angel heart è kaori a morire qui fai morire miki!!!! mi dispiace tantissimo per falcon e anche per kaori!!!spero pero che ryo capisca che non deve perdere tempo e dichiararsi a kaori. un bacione

Life

Ville (Pays): Bruxelles (Belgique)

05-12-2005

Review: Hey sweetie ! I foretell you're writing yet another great fanfic for us. How you can manipulate words the way you do, I just can't understand it. It's brilliant ! You really have a knack for choosing them and exploiting them to nuance them in every way. It's one of the things I admire in your writing (and I appreciate it even more now I'm translating Goddess of the Hunt, sometimes finding a correct translation without loosing the nuance can be a real challenge ! ^^ ) Anyway I hope you won't be too hard on our heroes, although I have already stocked my room with Kleenex boxes just in case... As for the ending, I agree with Chanlyr, choose the happy ending. Grief has to be compensated by laughter and happy endings. It's like a cocktail, you need a good mix ^^ Hope to see the rest of this tale soon, but don't forget your other stories now ! Kiss Mojca ! Life ^^

Chanlyr

Ville (Pays): Oakland (Usa)

04-12-2005

Review: how tense it is! I cannot wait for the next chapter. I like the way you describe Ryô's expectation facing Kaori's automatic response, the way he lets himself go, the way they emotionally react to the dreadful news, and subtlely response to their feelings. How dramatic it is, hope ends the chapter and I do hope you chose the positive end ^_^ I just like happy ending.

Aline

Ville (Pays): New Orleans (La)

02-08-2005

Review: The end of this prologue made my blood run cold. The hand hanging liply and the crimson marring the ivory skin... I'm still shivering. It was like I was there, seeing everything, and not being able to do anything to prevent the disaster. You can write drama as well as humor. Maybe even better as the story will progress. Once again you left me speechless. You indeed rock, Aline.