Life

Ville (Pays): Bruxelles (Belgique)

01-06-2005

Review: Alright. I came down from my cloud... and wonder if I was in my right mind doing so. Mojca !! That was plain cruel for poor Kaori. And on her birthday !! I certainly hope you'll make it up to her in the next chapter when Ryo catches up with her or else you'll have one very angry character (as well as a bonsai ^_^ mainly yours truly) at you. So keep on writing your wonderful stuf but please keep in mind my words if you want to live to see the next sunrise LOL ^^ Take care sweetie ! Kiss, Life

Lou

Ville (Pays): Montpellier (France)

01-06-2005

Review: that's what everybody expected... and Ryo is really stupid... on the other hand, I always thought that asking for answers was better than going away... Kaori... you're too suspicious... just give him a chance to tell the truth and then... kick him...! I'm looking forward reading the next chapter...! Mojca, you rock !

I_love_Ryo

Ville (Pays): Pisa (Italy)

01-06-2005

Review: Questa fic è semplicemente stupenda! e penso che il bello debba ancora venire! Non vedo l'ora di leggere il seguito! Mojca continua così!

Mag

Ville (Pays): Lyon (France)

01-06-2005

Review: Hi. Sorry, i don't have much time to leave a long review. I just wanted to say that it's the kind of thing that happens, when you jump head first into a relationship while not being honest with your significant other. Lies always come back to hunt you. Well, at least, i was right, and no, i am not a medium, i didn't read into your mind !!

Mopsime

Ville (Pays): Bruxelles (Belgique)

01-06-2005

Review: again a wonderful chapiter, am so curious about pandora, is she linked with the other secret ? argh it will be hard to wait for the next chapiter! Was also wondering if kaori is still a virgin or not in your fic...I ll probably know in a few chapiter! Because they have to finish toghether, hein! well you know what to do I think: write as soon as possible the continuation! ^_~ kisses

Engel

Ville (Pays): Doha (Qatar)

29-05-2005

Review: Ouf!! Finally together it seems! That really was a wonderful chapter, I can still feel the shivers down my spine. I really can't help myself saying (or writing? LOL) that I'm definitly in love with that story of yours. I hope Ryo won't step off the line this time cuz if he does, Kaori's really gonna get pissed at him and this time for good. I still want to know more about Pandora (even if you gave us some informations about in that chapter), cuz I really love that kid (?) and her sense of humor. So what else can I say except that you're such a talented writer (tell me if repeat myself) and that I can't wait to read the next chapter ? Good luck! love, Engel

Moon

Ville (Pays): Liège (Bel)

29-05-2005

Review: hey mojca, enfin le chapitre que j'attendais avec cette fameuse lettre qui était magnifiquement écrit. J'ai de voir quand leur relation va avancé (point de vue sentiment et professionnel). Ne nous fais pas attendre pour la suite car sinon je vais plus te lâcher!!lol bisous

Life

Ville (Pays): Bruxelles (Belgique)

28-05-2005

Review: Sight. STOP. Deep sight. STOP. No comments. STOP. Still dreaming. STOP. Will get back to you another time. STOP. Call me down from my cloud when next chapter is ready. STOP. Good luck. STOP. OVER. PS: wonderful chapter. STOP OVER & OUT

Mag

Ville (Pays): Lyon (France)

28-05-2005

Review: Why do i get the feeling that it's the calm before the storm ? Kaori still doesn't know about Ryo's other job with Mick and Falcon. She doesn't know about Pandora. Who is, in my opinion, neither a child (no baby-sitter, able to cook), nor a teenager (her reaction to Ryo's dream of Kaori, not at all the reaction of a teenage girl or an adult). Is she 12 years old ? Just a guess. But Kaori is the kind of girl to not trust easily, and she could misinterpret the situation and break up with Ryo if she believes Pandora is his illegitimate daughter.

Mopsime

Ville (Pays): Bruxelles (Belgique)

28-05-2005

Review: eh ben...je comprend mieux que kaori lui en veuille a ce point!!! et du coup on comprend mieux aussi pourquoi il est parti...y avait que ca a faire...en tout cas je te l'ai déja dit je crois mais j'adore ton style!!! et tes personnages...tu leur a donné un caractère bien trempé qui fait que c'est un vrai régal de lire chaque chapitre!!! vivement la suite...je veux voir comment tout ca va se résoudre!!!