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Lou | Ville (Pays): Montpellier (France) | 24-10-2005 | Review: Well, well, well... if I have well anderstood, somebody has shot Kaory... very good... bit of action... so please, send the next chapter...! | |
Eden | Ville (Pays): Strbg (France) | 22-10-2005 | Review: Hello Mojca!! Today i write in french. Ok encore un super chapitre que voilà. Et Mick, il n'en rate pas une. Non mais, venir déranger nos deux toutereaux. Sinon, t'es pas sympa de couper comme ça ton chap. Car la patience c'est pas mon fort, alors, please maj vite la suite. Bisous | |
Moon | Ville (Pays): Liège (Bel) | 22-10-2005 | Review: hello miss torture!!! tu coupe encore le chapitre ou il ne fallait pas!!! Ryo est toujours aussi idiot. J'espere que les ennemis de ryo n'attaqueront pas kaori sinon elle va vraiment être fâché sur lui!!! on a plus de nouvelle de hide et saeko. je pense qu'ils s'amusent trop bien en voyage de noce... bref, j'attend la suite avc impatience... gros bisoux | |
Life | Ville (Pays): Bruxelles (Belgique) | 22-10-2005 | Review: Hey girl ! As always one heck of a chapter ! But why o why do you always have to cut it at the wrong moment !!! What happened to Kaori ? Is it Ryo's ennemies ? Who are they ? What does Pandora and her parents have to do with it ? What happened all those years ago ? Aaaargh !!! You are torturing me Mojca !! T__T So move your cute bud and write that next chapter before I kill you in my madness ! LOL And don't forget your explanations in that chapter ! ^^ | |
Moon | Ville (Pays): Liège (Bel) | 16-10-2005 | Review: hello mojca, how are you? i'm very happy that you could write the continuation of this story... which I adore! you describe the hot scene really well and it have some perturbing! I am happy to read the continuation... especially the investigation that kaori will start. see you soon miss mojca, bye | |
Eden | Ville (Pays): Strbg (France) | 16-10-2005 | Review: Hello Mojca!! Oh waouh !!! It's just that i can say after reading your story. This fic is very very fabulous and original. The relationship between Ryo and Kaori is very hot. You write the scene very good. I hope you maj the other chapter very quickly. See you soon Kiss | |
Nanou | Ville (Pays): Champigny sur marne (France) | 15-10-2005 | Review: God, Mojca, I am upside down with your wonderful chapter!
You have such a talent to describe the scenes!
I'm so happy to see Ryô and Kaori, together... I'm eager to read you very soon.
Big kisses, see you soon.
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Engel | Ville (Pays): Paris (France) | 08-10-2005 | Review: hey! it's been a really long time since my last review so here i am :) i am so glad you started writing this fic again after all this time (we missed u and ur divine writing so much) and the wait was worth it. i found it really sweet that Ryo was jealous cause Kaori was gonna be in Eriko's underwear show and how worried he was about Kaori's 'disappearance' after that but i also laughed my head off at the way he overreacted with her, being so overprotective, aahh (sigh) romance scenes really are the best. however, i wish we'll see more of pandora soon and how exactly she came into ryo's and mick's hands. i am a bit sad that ur planning on finishing this fic soon cause i really liked it but anyways, u really are doing a great job, so don't give up, we're all impatiently waiting for ur next update!!!
luv, Engel | |
Lou | Ville (Pays): New york city (Usa) | 01-10-2005 | Review: Ho my goodness...! didn't you ever write any erothic novel before...? that was a real pleasure to read it... I mean it... I'd love to meet a guy like Ryo Saeba... wowwww.. he's so hot... I need to take a shower... a very long cold one and I think I'll cry right after... why guys are not all like him...? anyway... please...! give us the sequel as soon as possible... please...!!! | |
Life | Ville (Pays): Bruxelles (Belgique) | 01-10-2005 | Review: I need to cool down ! Urgently !! Waouah !! That was hot ! And your previous chapters were already veryyyy hot !! Damn it girl, why do you write stuff like that when I don't have a boyfriend I can take my lust too. Argh ! Well, anyway that was one great chapter ! Keep on like that ! Kiss, Life | |
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