Chronos

Ville (Pays): - (Uk)

25-09-2006

Review: Ahaaah so I was right, Ryo has a hot and steamy dream and Kaori has a glimpse of it... very interesting! I love when she asked him if he had a nightmare and he replies 'Not at all'...that is sure eheh. Poor Ryo, he looks quite troubled and tired of waking up every night, sweating and doing his best to keep his feelings at bay... it would be funny if Kaori once has more than a glimpse and see herself in his X-rated dream... looking forward to reading the next chapter - as usual! C.

Chanlyr

Ville (Pays): Oakland (Usa)

16-09-2006

Review: je suis déroutée et j'ai la ferme impression que le malheur va s'abattre sur eux. Décidément cette robe a de curieux effets sur eux, la conséquence de tout ça? dans le prochain chapitre? ça m'inquiète.

Grifter

Ville (Pays): Paris (France)

16-09-2006

Review: hi Mijca Woah i am definitely in for your director's cut on your website ! :) Soo hot and so visual your description! I can only ask for MORE Big kiss my dear and please i am begging for the next chapter :)

Nanou

Ville (Pays): Champigny sur marne (France)

16-09-2006

Review: Hello Mojca! Mamamia, what a night! Ah, if Ryô could come into my room like that, I will not let him out! Lol I hope It's not another dream of Kaori...Kiss.

Kary

Ville (Pays): Limoges (France)

16-09-2006

Review: Waouh ! was the first word to come when your chapter ended! I'm still in love with your story!!! Thank you !!!

Chronos

Ville (Pays): - (Uk)

15-09-2006

Review: First, welcome back Mojca, hope you had great vacation! Second, thank you for the new chapter, very hot indeed! Loved it, as planned. I can't help still thinking that is a dream, a Ryo's dream / fantasy and, as Kaori can access his mind, she dreams it too - if that is the case, she might wake up with curled toes the following morning eheh. One last comment: poor lacy teddy, completely new, kept in a box for such a long time and been torn away in one swift movement. Its life expectancy wasn't very long, eheh. Hope your writer's block will go away soon, if that is not the case, I will not mind another similar piece of work! XX, C.

Grifter

Ville (Pays): Paris (France)

03-09-2006

Review: Hello Mojca :) I like how Kaori stands against her partner, boy he can be so shalow sometimes, how can he really expect that she will follow his orders and go duck somewhere hiding ? And he dared to tell her to shut up ? Whoah, no kidding he wants her well way of of him No way, i really enjoyed them picking up on one another, you can feel the tension through your words :) Kiss and looking forward to read the next chapter :)

DreamingWorld

Ville (Pays): Paris (France)

02-09-2006

Review: Congratulations Mojca for this fine fiction! There's everything in it : erotism, suspense... and action, it seems! I'm longing to read the next chapters!!

Chronos

Ville (Pays): - (Uk)

01-09-2006

Review: Thanks Mojca, that was a good argument between two obstinate and strong-will people - I love that! Kaori needs to be careful though or Ryo will start to be suspicious - hope he will not mention / check with Saeko but I have a feeling he will... wait and seee again. Nice to see an over-protective Ryo towards Kaori, I particulalry enjoyed his last thoughts - not as much as Kaori though eheh (I know, she is not a living person but doesn't matter). Have great vacation Mojca! Cheers, C.

Chanlyr

Ville (Pays): Oakland (Usa)

27-08-2006

Review: oh la la, mais ça prend une tournure à laquelle je ne m'attendais pas du tout, et tant mieux parce que là je suis tout ouï ^_^ j'aime beaucoup, c'est un aspect que j'ai rarement lu et le rendu est impressionnant de réalisme. J'ai un moment cru qu'elle s'évanouissait mais là, wouah (impressionnée) Faut que je me dépêche de traduire pour ceux qui ne lisent pas l'anglais ^_^