Grifter

Ville (Pays): Paris (France)

26-08-2006

Review: hi Mojca Woah that was strong, poor Kaori she went through his memories no wonder she puked i mean the man has a closet full of skeletons Anyway he seems to really want to sort things out so i hope the situation will improve for them Take care :)

Chronos

Ville (Pays): - (Uk)

26-08-2006

Review: Hello Mojca, thanx for the new chapter - this time, Kaori has a glimpse of Ryo's heavy past and what a past! She now understands better what he went through, what his old memories ad nightmares are made of... chilling. Looking forward the next chapter (why do I have the feeling to be repeating myself? eheh), I'm particularly looking forward Kaori's attitude towards Ryo and vice-versa - when will Ryo realise that Kaori has this new ability - will he ever discover, that's the question. Maybe this 'power' will last long enough for Kaori to understand Ryo and his feelings better and will disappear when its purpose is done... wait & see. Cheers, C.

Nanou

Ville (Pays): Champigny sur marne (France)

26-08-2006

Review: Hello Mojca! Poor Kaori, she is now really aware of Ryô's past, she sees it like she was with him. Now she understands his feelings. Ryô is upset by her behaviuor but he will never let het alone, he will protect her ever and ever. Sweet chapter despite the subject. Kiss.

Grifter

Ville (Pays): Paris (France)

25-08-2006

Review: hi Mojca :) I hate Ryo when he is behaving like that, such a jerk i mean, Kaori is not stupid she will understand some day Big kiss and looking forward to read the next chapter bisous :)

Chanlyr

Ville (Pays): Oakland (Usa)

20-08-2006

Review: aah une intrigue des plus corsées s'amorce ^_^ chouette ^_^ ça sent le roussi tout ça, comment Kaori va-t-elle réagir sachant qu'il a accepté la mission de Saeko? comment va-t-elle réagir à son arrivée (c'est marrant j'ai comme l'idée qu'ils vont cohabiter à trois chez eux ou chez elle ^_^) elle ne va pas y perdre la tête entre le ryô professionnel et ses pensées, le Ryô version Kaori dans les parages et les pensées intimes et privées de Ryô ? Tiens faudrait qu'il mette une pancarte "privée" ce qui empecherait Kaori de les lire, ses pensées ^_^ Je ne sais pas quand ce qui s'est passé la nuit où elle a "rêvé" érotique va ressortir mais ça va faire des dégâts quand ça éclatera. Autrement je ne vois pas la raison de ce chapitre à cet endroit de la fic. Bon, je commence à trop me poser de questions. A plus pour la suite ^_^

Chronos

Ville (Pays): - (Uk)

19-08-2006

Review: Tssss the same old same... Ryo who doesn't want to admit his feelings to others and tries as ever the same old tricks. At least he is honest with himself now and is fully aware that the situation, as it is, is convenient for him... hope it will change for this coward! Well maybe the new job will unfold things and push him to progress with his relationship with Kaori. Look forward to the next chapter. Cheers, C.

Nanou

Ville (Pays): Champigny sur marne (France)

19-08-2006

Review: Hello Mojca! Well, Saeko is acting well in pushing Ryô to tell the truth of his love to Kaori. But the man is not ready to do it, even in the future. Poor Kaori, she's angry with him and his bad behaviour when he sees a sexy woman. She feels moraly bad, how could it be different? Ryô will never change. The mission Saeko gives him is strange. How can he protect the wife of a man he killed? Why Saeko gives him this mission? What does she have in mind? Kiss.

Nanou

Ville (Pays): Champigny sur marne (France)

13-08-2006

Review: Hello Mojca! Well, the precious chapter was just a dream, what a pity! Kaori is having fun in teasing Ryô. Poor guy who is completely upset by her behaviour. Unfortunately, Saeko comes to break this intimacy with another non-paid mission and Ryô reacts as usual, as a pervert with this sexy woman...what a desperate man...Kisses.

Chronos

Ville (Pays): - (Uk)

12-08-2006

Review: Hello Mojca, thanks for the new chapter. I wonder if Kaori, with her new power, didn't dream Ryo's dream, a dream she doesn't remember when she wakes up... that could explain the funny thing with her toes eheh. Anyway, before I continue with my probable nonsense, v good chapter, Kaori is thoroughly enjoying her new ability - the following scenes can only be promising! Cheers, C.

Chronos

Ville (Pays): / (Uk)

07-08-2006

Review: Mojca? what's going on here? in the last chapter you left us wondering how she will cope with her new 'power' and now you leave us panting of desire and frustration? That was hot but is it a dream? some explanations are required: what made Ryo forget all his resolutions and decide to 'touch the paradise'? Don't tell me it's the nightdress... not convinced with that as she was covered with a sheet and he was already undressing. Anyway, dream or not, that was hot! C.